I have been guilty of these. ( I was just seeing it in my last post.) I think most writers at some point of time have been guilty of these.
Long, wordy writings, I mean.
We writers LOVE those.
Sometimes we get so carried away with the beauty of what we are writing, we forget what we were writing about in the first place.
The editor does not, however.
So, when in LOVE (with writing), KISS (Keep It Simple, Sweet!)