#atozchallenge: S is for Show, Don’t Tell #fiction #writing #quotes

 Theme: Quotes from Authors and Bookish People about Writing

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Today on Amlokiblogs I want to discuss the sage advice given to writers, “Show don’t tell.”

Show, don’t tell is a technique often employed in various kinds
of texts to enable the reader to experience the story through action,
words, thoughts, senses, and feelings rather than through the author’s
exposition, summarization, and description. The goal is not to drown the
reader in heavy-handed adjectives, but rather to allow readers to
interpret significant details in the text. The technique applies equally
to nonfiction and all forms of fiction, including literature, speech, movie making, and playwriting.

I have to admit that this piece of advice/ technique has improved my writing, but one of the things I learned is that the difficult part of the skill lies not in “Show don’t tell’, but in making a choice: what and when do you show, and when do you tell? Sometimes I end up summarising an important event in my story while writing about a minor one in a detailed scene. Does this ever happen to you?

Here are a few writers talking about this technique

“Show the readers everything, tell them
― Ernest
to say, many great novelists combine “dramatic” showing with long
sections of the flat-out authorial narration that is, I guess, what is meant by
telling. And the warning against telling leads to a confusion that causes
novice writers to think that everything should be acted out — don’t tell us a
character is happy, show us how she screams “yay” and jumps up and
down for joy — when in fact the responsibility of showing should be assumed by
the energetic and specific use of language.”
― Francine Prose
  “Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me
the glint of light on broken glass.”
― Anton Chekhov

“You don’t write about the horrors of war.
No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying in the road.”
― Richard Price
Have you ever come across writing which could do better with less showing and more telling? Which of the quotes above do you agree with and why?

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  1. Janine Delaney Morgan

    All three are great quotes. There needs to be a balance. The problem arises in figuring out how much to show and how much to tell. Books (or stories) are not movies or a tv episode. There are times when telling or back-story is important for the reader to understand the dynamics of a relationship, a character, or an event happening on the page.

  2. klahanie

    Hi Damyanti,

    Show, but don't tell. A concept that I have been known to use. In my case, the reader is part of the story and they draw their own conclusions. Chekov's is a quote I can relate to.

    How are you doing, Damyanti?

    Your friend,

    Gary 🙂

  3. tombensoncreative.com

    I think each of those quotes tells it like it is, but in a different way. It would be true to say that at least half of my own writing is 'tell' during the first draft, just so that I can get the story out. The second pass is when I amend the 'telling' and show the majority of it. I use dialogue sometimes to tell, and I think it works if it's not overdone.

  4. Michelle Stanley

    Ernest Hemingway and Chekov's quotes compliment each other. I like these quotes and it is something I do try to follow, especially after getting this advice early in my writing career. Don't know if I succeed each time , but do my best.

  5. S.K. Anthony

    Oooh I like Chekhov's quote! I still struggle with it I think, that's why I like stepping back from my work and go back after a little break to see it more clearly. It helps. But I know more practice will surely help. 😉

  6. Stepheny Houghtllin

    I knew it was a good idea when I started following you during this #atozchallenge. Thanks for this good info. I love the quotes. I used the Anton Chechov quote not to long ago on my author FB page. Love it.

  7. David P. King

    I've adopted the counter variation, since any attempt to "show" any piece of writing will never create the same image in the reader's mind that the author has in their mind. But if an imagine is created, mission accomplished. It's the director/the artist's job to show. Authors are storytellers. We tell, but the question is, are we telling effectively? 🙂

  8. Sophie Duncan

    Show, don't tell is a real toughie, because, as you say, it is all about knowing when to tell and when to show. I sometimes rely on my betas and editors to tell me if I've got it wrong, and I do the same when I'm editing/betaing for other people, because, as a writer, I find myself too close to text sometimes, it's in my head and I just plain get it wrong. 🙂
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  9. Michael Di Gesu

    Hi, Damyanti,

    Thanks for stopping by my blog earlier…

    Although we ALL know this rule, I feel at times there is a certain beauty in telling… Especially when it comes to children… they say "Tell me a story…" Not show. and the Classic "Once upon a time…" will and SHOULD NEVER go out of fashion. It's magical.