#AtoZchallenge #flashfiction: X for Xenophobics, please use the Trans-species urinals

As part of the A to Z Challenge,  through the month of April I’ll be posting a story a day based on photographs by Joseph W. Richardson and prompts given to me by blog-friends.
Writing prompt: X for Xenophobics, please use the Trans-species urinals

Provided by: Mary Wallace, friend, fellow blogger, and one of the Magnificent Seven of #TeamDamyanti


Xenophobics please use the Trans-species urinals
Xenophobics please use the Trans-species urinals

      Kirpal, they’d named him, or Kind. According to his grandparents, a Sikh could have had no better name.

      Kirpal Singh would head the prayers for the first time today, so he’d washed his long white hair, combed it clean, tied it in a knot with shaky hands, covered it with his pale blue turban. His Kara shone bright, the steel bangle on his wrist reminding him of the continuity of life.

         Today he wore the Kirpan, a sword, not the usual dagger– but the Guru’s sword, meant to protect others from harm, defend the weak. He felt its weight as it hung from his shoulder, strapped across his chest.

           In a few minutes, he would step out, they would bow before the holy Book, the Granth Sahib. The air would fill with holy song and pryer and incense. The Gurudwara shone today, the white marble floor, the photos of all the gurus on the walls, covered in garlands of marigold.


Xenophobics, please use the Trans-species urinals, Michael’s grandpa used to say, and there are none in Wisconsin, and none in my cafe! He loved them all at his corner cafe, whites, blacks, Arabs, Indians, Chinese, Koreans, the lot.

        They all like my coffee and my coffee it’s the same color, he said, and the money they pay is green. What do I care?

        But Michael cared, he cared now, ever since those turbaned bastards walked into the cafe and shot his grandpa, blew his poor bald head off, splattered his blood and brains on the brown tiles and the coffee machine. They didn’t care he brought Michael up, that he ran a soup kitchen on weekends, or that he’d fostered a dozen other kids. They saw a white man, and they fired. You don’t fire at a white man in America, not if you value your skin. Michael would show them.


That morning at the Gurudwara, as Kirpal walked slow steps towards his first prayer as head priest, Michael slammed the door of his pickup, patted the handguns under his overcoat, and strode up the steps, without bothering to take his shoes off like the faithful, or washing his feet. Muslims were all alike, washing their feet before prayer, but shooting poor old men at work. What his brother said about Sikhs not being Muslims? Bullshit. They all wore the same clothes, Arabs, every last one of them.

         When he was done, and lay gurgling on the marble floor, all he remembered was the old, bearded grandfather running at him. The man had a sword raised against his bullets, shoving the women and children behind him, running at him despite each red splatter on his white clothes, his blue turban. Just the way his own grandpa would have done.

          He heard the wail of the sirens, the cries of the wounded, and his ears rang with the shot that felled him. A white officer behind him. He would get that one, as soon as he could stand up. The marble floor before his eyes looked slick with blood. His blood, and the old man’s, both thick and red, slow flowing down the gentle slope towards the gully through which ran the water for the faithful to wash their feet.


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  1. Michelle Sherlock

    Just read your blog for the first time. That really got to me even though I could see what was coming, I wanted to shout, “stop”, intervene, anything to stop the slaughter… and that’s the point at the end of theday!

  2. Mou Mishra

    I especially liked the end when joined the gully through which water passed for washing the feet of faithfuls. It really speaks a lot.

    • Damyanti

      Thank you for sharing this song. If we all had a little more empathy, compassion, and love, the world would be a better place.

  3. uniqusatya

    Reminded me of “The best poem of 2006”,which was nominated by UN as the best poem of 2006, Written by an African Kid 🙂

    When I born, I black
    When I grow up, I black
    When I go in Sun, I black
    When I scared, I black
    When I sick, I black
    And when I die, I still black

    And you white fellow
    When you born, you pink
    When you grow up, you white
    When you go in sun, you red
    When you cold, you blue
    When you scared, you yellow
    When you sick, you green
    And when you die, you gray

    And you calling me colored?

  4. Elaine Jeremiah

    This is great, really powerful. I like the way it starts off quite calmly, but by the end it’s shocking. I’ve enjoyed reading your flashfiction for this blog challenge. 🙂

  5. Birgit

    I just came from a blog that talks about culture and education and then I come to your beautifully written story that really speaks about the issues at hand and how hatred can distort. You wrote this so well