I have been guilty of these. ( My last post, for instance.) I think most writers have, at some point.
Long, wordy pages, I mean.
We writers LOVE those.
Sometimes we get so carried away with the ‘beauty’ of our writing, we forget what we were writing about in the first place.
The editor does not, however.
So, when in LOVE (with writing), KISS (Keep It Simple, Sweet!)